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I didnt really it, sorry

As much as I try to like it...it just feels very stale. I don't know if that's because you used FL presets but the drums just stick out way too much and dont actually make a rythm for me.

wyldfyre1 responds:

thats ok =) Some people like it some don't heh this honostly isn't one of MY favorite songs that i came out with either. thanks for the review and the honosty =).

PURE AWESOMENESS

Dude that buildup from 2:14 to 2:25 was just awesome.
Kinda bummed that you didn't do the same thing later when it looped.

Amazing song, this is definetly going on my ipod.

Please do more songs like this.

A-New-Decade responds:

Thanks!!!

It's ok

Alright man the into was good. The drums have a nice sound (don't change their loudness) but THE GUITARS MUST BE LOUDER.

Then endig idk if you were drunk but that just plain sucked. Come on you could have at least included some power riffs in there or anything at all. Seriously it sounded like a dying cat/whale.

Sorry if it sounds like im negative I just give mostly pesimistic constructive criticism. Nice intro though with blending the two guitars together and nice mix tempo of the two.

The-Eastern-Front responds:

lol, thats a pefect way to describe it, lol that thing at the end isnt part of the song, its some weird sound taht came out after i converted the song to mp3, i have nno clue what it is, but yes, it does sound like a dying whale :)

Fuck the tech

Kick ass song dude. This is one of those songs you can tell its good just by listening to it without the need of all the fancy schmancy shit enhancing shit.

Keep rocking dude and nice style. A bit glitchy at parts (technical or not) but this song truly shines.

Try to get some drums in even if its just a basic beat it will hold it together a bit more.

10 for giving me a free tune that kicks twice as much @$$ as the ones I pay $1 for:)

mhb responds:

thanx man. no problem on the free tune. i think music should be free anyways. but i'm insane and hate money. go figure! thanx for the ten. and i'll see about addin' drums to a revision in the future.

THIS $H!T RULES

THIS $H!T RULES

How the hell did this song get a 3.98 this is some good stuff and deserves to be on the first page.

Rock on man.

Evil-Dog responds:

Hey man, thanks for the compliments, I'm glad you liked it

You need to spend more time editing.

I hate to be the only negative person here but you seriously need to spend more time editing and re-recording. A lot of the guitar playing is way off with the drums and apparently your muff double (or whatever u want to call it) you cant play fast enough to match the drums. Add a few more parts to it to make it non-repetitive. Other than that this song is great. Keep up the good work.

Chrizzly responds:

You could have shortened that with: "Evrything sucks, other than that its great!"...hehe...just jokin...Well i guess youre right at some points...muff double...lol...funny...thank you anyway for reviewing...constructive critism is at least better than "YOU FUCKING SUCK,MAN GO HANG YOURSELF!!!"

I hate u bitch

FALCON UR A BITCH AND U KNOW WHY. FUCK YOU. EVERYONE THIS GUY IS A CHEAT. HE MAY MAKE HIS MUSIC BUT EVERYTHING SUCH AS WEBSITES AND SHIT HE COPY AND PASTES FROM OTHER PEOPLE WHO WORKED REALLY HARD ON IT.

FUCK YOU

Demon-Slayer12 responds:

hmm. . . lets see. Falcon? Who the fuck is Falcon? Man, I write my own shit but websites and shit? What the fuck? Where the hell did you get that? Man you're just a jealous fuck who can't write your own fuckin songs. Man, you better hope you wrote this review for the wrong song because if I knew where you lived I would fuckin beat the living bejesus out of you, so bad that your mother would feel it, and I would send your soul to hell to rot with the rest of the scumbags like yourself. So, be careful what you say. . . we might meet someday, heh, maybe at one of my fuckin shows, and we'll see who the bitch is then HAHAHAHA. Until then, have a nice day.

Alright but speedmetalmessiah should try to tune

The song itself is pretty good and speedmetalmessiah gets the timing of the solo just right which is one of the hardest things to do so gj. But there are other things like HE NEEDS TO TUNE HIS GUITAR. Either that or hes not hitting the sharps because it always sounds flat on the D base lines at the begginning and end. Good job on figuring out the notes to how to play this but realize there are some notes off.

Overall good job though

FlameMesial responds:

Hmmm, never noticed that - and I never will.

Speedmetalmessiah played the notes dead on in my point of view, and if there were a few flat notes, it would barely be noticable.

Thanks for the scores in my review, but I'd say that if you didn't try to figure out every dud note and untuning, you'd probably enjoy the music alot more.

Thanks again.

Its ok

Just to get this out of the way the vocals are a piece of shit and the song would be much better without them.

Moving on you have a pretty good rythm of a drum and it has for some reason an "Action Hero" theme at the beginning

laggy-luk responds:

i know the vocals are piece of shit but i just couldn't resist it ;p
dunno whats action hero

Just got Fruity Loops a few days ago and am still trying to figure things out. That's pretty much why my audo submissions suck but I'm hoping they'll get better over time. IM if you want to teach me a few things over AIM or give me some tuts I could use.

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